Aydin-Jewelz123's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Celestial Hypersaw(preview 3)]

WOW :D :D :D

I must say dude, you have achieved new levels yet again! Wow dude, I'm admiring the rapid progress you are making. This sounds very cool and tech savvy :D I mean you made sytrus instruments sound decent!

Points of advice, you need to adjust some volumes here and there such as the piano at 1:22, instead of having it come in at full volume, have it come in from a quieter volume and build up, it will sound a far smoother transition and add man points to your piece :)

Keep up the good work, sorry the review came a bit late.

LedZeppelinluver180 responds:

Hey man its no problem at all it took you a little while thanks for the review tho... and yeah i know i need to fix the volume on the piano i just threw that in there really quick and wanted to get it online to see what people thought of it cause im almost done with this song. but yeah i will fix that. thanks for all of the complements i really appreciate it... dood i just made a new song too its also a preview but its a hip hop beat im putting on newgrounds right now so when you get a chance you should definitly check it out i promise it will be epic lol. its titled "Deep Thoughts" its not even close to being finished but im just givin everyone a preview of the most epic song in all the land lmao jk but you know what im saying when you listen to it. thanks again for the review man i appreciate it anytime you need one lemme know peace

[Super Mega Hyper Idea Mas]

NICE!!

Great lineup dude, i normally dont like these kinda things but this is great, well done.

ErikMcClure responds:

Thanks xD

[Village [Redux]]

Wow..............

This is an amazing piece man, very nicely crafted and very artistic. The instruments blend in perfectly together and the overall piece is welded very nicely. You got all tens from me dude :) Could see this in a fantasy/rpg video game, amazing stuff. Make it longer!

ErikMcClure responds:

Making this song longer is somewhat tricky, since its designed as a subtle loop to be playing during a game, and so if I made it any longer it would likely be simple ambience. I probably could throw in a 3rd melody eventually though.

Glad you like it! :D

[New Hip Hop*]

Sounds tight

The beat works really nicely, just take a tad volume off the hihats, piano is nice, add a different rhythm to it and it will fit in even better making it feel kinda hip/hopish :) apart from that its pretty sick man :D well done

LedZeppelinluver180 responds:

:) thanks man i appreciate it you think the hi hats are too loud tho? hmm i guess they kinda are lol ill change that and make a new rhythm and see what happens with that too

[*Dark Dreams*]

Fits the name

This sounds very original so well done for that :)

Quick tips: Turn the volumes of everything down and turn your speakers up when making the song, this way you wont get static sounds or like rough sounding instruments when you've exported it. I use to have this problem and realised by simply turning down the volume the sound quality shot up. Errm, not many other points I can think of, its pretty well rounded and sounds finished to a good degree, make the ending varied a bit, perhaps have all the instruments do something crazy in quick succession then end it with a delay on all the instruments, like the nightmare was over or something.

Apart from these, this is a very well rounded piece. Perhaps make another one called Bright Dreams, taking the drum pattern into a happy version of the melody :P

LedZeppelinluver180 responds:

For sure dood thanks im glad you like what i have done lately

[City Night]

I'm liking it

The introduction is very good, some volume levels could be slightly adjusted, but thats not a major problem, what you need to work on is a different main body for the song, the way it sounded was that it was leading into a main section where a more powerful beat and perhaps a new melody was going to enter or it was going to be an anti climax where it would go quieter with just the drum beat and bass so that a rapper could jump in, one of these is essential to evolve your song further, perhaps 0:54 comes in earlier.

Has a lot of potential mate, work hard on this one ;)
Well done

LedZeppelinluver180 responds:

:) thanks ha ha will do man

[*Underground Experience*]

Sounds catchy and evil

Like the other dude said, you need to add some variety i.e. change the bassline or try something different with the pianos at some point, maybe take it up an octave. Adding in another instrument at one point may work. The cymbals at 1:41 chop up the song quiet harshly but if thats what you were aiming for then its ok but it didn't sound right to my ears, maybe ammend them. Start the song without the drum pattern or like have a drum roll into it, or have a piano roll into it, perhaps come in from quieter or something, experiment and see what you can do :)

Good work.

LedZeppelinluver180 responds:

for sure man ill see what i can do with it thanks a bunch for listening to all my music and reviewing it i appreciate it a lot

[No More Meaning]

Sounds decent

I'm going to start reviewing your stuff more harshly because you seem to have levelled up to the next level of music making ;)

The riff, rhythm, drum beat etc. are all great and there are many strong points about the song but listing these in every review will take me a long time so I'm just gonna get down to what you need to improve.

At 2:42, instead of having that synth play that melody have a light piano do it with a delay on it, try that and you will see how good it sounds :)

You need to take away the power from the synth, the emphasis of hip hop style music is usually on the drum beat, its what drives the song, so perhaps make the synth quieter at parts

Theres slight clashing at 0:36, sort out the volumes and it will sound much better

Apart from these and perhaps slight arrangement problems/preferences it sounds pretty decent mate :) normally i would give 10/10 but now im reviewing harsher for your own benefit

LedZeppelinluver180 responds:

HA HA yes! sweet dood thanks that means a lot that you think i have leveled up in my music making... i took a lot of what you have told me and that has helped me a so much man so yeah thanks a bunch and i will try that stuff out and ill re-post this song sometime in the near future

[The Electric Space Collision]

sounds pretty "badman"

yo dude, sorry i havent been replying to anything lately or reviewing your stuff, been really busy, but thanks for checking out my songs, really appreciate it, anyway, on with the review:

the melodies work very nicely together and the instruments are great, i like the style of the drum pattern, it has a nice rhythm, i think that you should add a more powerful snare at some point to give it more of a punch like songs from the dubstep genre, perhaps have it more punchy on the second snare cos its dum dum snare dum dum dum snare or something at the moment, make it dum dum snare dum dum dum SNARE, and this will give it more power

what you need to work on also is the arrangement of the song.
heres what i would have done

1) when you introduce the instrument at 0:24, bring it in from quieter to louder but instead of arpeggiated version, make it a single note one so it can build up with a clear sound, then perhaps arpeggiate it just before the drop, get rid of the beat from the beginning up till 0:41 where you bring it in from a quiet to full blown. at 0:48 have a slight pause, then bam incomes the full blown beat with the emphasis on the snare i mentioned earlier, also vary up the melodies in the early parts, you can be really experimental during the build up and show your skill here but when the beat gets going it must be constantly the same/similar to keep it flowing

just take some of it into consideration, it may or may not sound better, and sorry i havent been keeping in touch, youve really improved and this is a banging tune :)

good stuff, keep it up mate

LedZeppelinluver180 responds:

ha ha thanks man a bunch i really appreciate it that you got back to me n shit. I was wondering where you were and its chill dood i understand you were busy and shit but thanks for the review man ill try some of that shit out i like the idea of the snare also like you said.. if you like this song tho i have come out with a lot more songs so you should check those out too ive got a lot better songs than this one