Aydin-Jewelz123's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Transient Consciousness]

Pretty mysterious tune :D

Sounds very original, I love the instrument at 0:34ish, sounds sort of middle eastern, this song reminds me of something out of 300, it would suit very nicely in a dark atmosphere like that. You should extend it further, it would blend very nicely into a more powerful section with like strong drums and percussion, as if it were like a tradgic death or the battle was lost or something. Would be perfect :D The melodies are very nice, haven't heard something in 11/4 time in a while, sounds very nice :) Good stuff mate

ObsidianSnow responds:

Yeah, now that you mention it, it really might work well to bring it to a powerful climax and extend it... I'll see if I can figure anything out.

Until then, thanks for the review, Jewelz.

[The River Of Shadows]

Very melodic

Ye dude, I am really feeling this. The piano is very nice, the bass note on the piano goes along very nicely, sounds kinda like moonlight sonata. The small variation in velocity is nice too, so it blends the sounds nicely. It ended too soon though, that's my only criticism. I could imagine a violin or a string instrument accompanying the melody and taking it into a new section towards the end, like a more heartfelt but uplifting sound since the end of the song does get uplifting at around 1:00, it would fit in pretty nicely :)

Good work dude, keep up the good stuff :D

ObsidianSnow responds:

Thanks for your input - I found it all useful. You could be right about the violin idea - I'll look into it and see if anything interesting comes out of it.

Thanks for the review, Jewelz.

[The Ultimate Operation]

Very creative

I like the use of the off key stuff, it makes the song feel really different from the norm, the beat is cool, i like the beginning mashup into the first part, that sounded pretty cool :D the synth is very nice and catchy, overall good stuff :) dnno if everyone who likes techno will like the off keyness but i can certainly appreciate it and its very nice :)

dicennian responds:

Thats what I wonder too, the off-keyness. So far ppl seems satisfied

[Birds Are Looking Down]

Wow, very nice

I like the strings, they start it off very well, the extra harpsichord I believe it is lays ontop really nicely, sounds kinda oriental but not all the way, the drum pattern is pretty much spot on, the instruments need an upgrade tho like to make them sound more realistic, it would be so cool if you could get a full orchestra sound backing the strings, but ye very good song, I can really vibe along with this well. Well done mate :)

dicennian responds:

Your comment is intressting. You really are right, an orchestral backing it up would do it. Very good idea. Don't be too astonished if you see a upgrade for this song coming!

[The Music That Moves You]

Very energetic

Has a cosmic, happy feel to it :) I like the flow of energy and unlike what that other dude said I think the extra layer of synth you had does fill in very nicely indeed :D The effects sounds pretty spot on, the next step is to master the "Parametric EQ" thing on fruity loops, try adding that to your master channel and play around with it to get an idea of what it does :)

Overall great stuff dude, you've done really well my friend
10/10
5/5

LedZeppelinluver180 responds:

thanks man i really appreciate the amount of help and everything you've given to me and i thought this was one of my best songs and thought that you might like it if you heard it so yeah thanks for all the feed back and everything i'll check some of your songs out here pretty soon and let you know when i add some new music again

[The Fairy Fountain]

Very nice

For a second song made without saving this is very nice, sounds perfect for an mmorpg or pokemon game or something, good stuff :)

brujeria responds:

this song is from the legend of zelda

[Toccata Irrequieta_]

Very nice

The piano at parts sounds very similar to a song I've heard before but I can't quite put my hand on it, good stuff mate, the piano could maybe use a bit of dynamics in the lower range, as in softer at parts, and perhaps a few more quick rolls between notes like at 0:08.

Good stuff, keep it up

alnajuum responds:

Thanks for the advice! If you have the time, go listen to my other piano submission "Infection". It is much more catchy and I think you might like it. :)

[Cybernoid]

Ye dude im feelings this

The melodies are very funky, the synth is great, good stuff

BIGraw responds:

Thank you! :D
-New version uploaded here! :)

[Boy Im Amp]

Sounds cool

But I hate southern flavoured rap music with a fury unimaginable so I am trying to vote fairly. The melodies sounds catchy but at some points it maybe goes too high, the bassy saw instrument is pretty cool, nice and powerful, maybe give more emphasis to your kicks to back it, the claps are a tad frustrating but like i said its probably because i dislike this style of music very much.

Its cool tho, keep doing what you do mate

Fahizzle responds:

Thanks man, i understand what ur saying, but the claps you are referring to are snares, from a hip hop pack on fruity loops. Idk im not spending as much time making beats anymore because I lift weights and cycle through girlfriends.....

Oh man thanks for the review btw

[Electrog]

Gets the body moving

Sounds pretty epic, nice use of distortion too, it ends to early though, make it longer :) I like the bass too, its nice and deep, the climax of the song could have been a tad more powerful I reckon or you could have made the other parts a bit weaker to add emphasis to the drop, otherwise great stuff, keep doing what you do :)

InvertedScrotum responds:

tanks,,(B