Aydin-Jewelz123's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Unkown Impact]

FUCKING TUNNEEEE :P

Sounds great mate, didn't realised you had uploaded this, great stuff :D

SniperSnake19 responds:

Mehehe, Thanks mate

ye I uploaded a while back. I'm still not satisfied thats why you may not have heard about it :P.

Catch ya later,
Spine Therapist

[Ricky's Theme]

Pretty nice

I like the melodies and the power you've given to the stings, the randomness really stands out and I think that's a pretty good thing :) Only real criticism I have is to perhaps make it longer :D Keep up the work dude, lemme know when you've started the collab thingy mabob :)

halfangelfreak responds:

Little do you know, I've started the collab thing already.

Thanks, for the review, and I'll work on making them longer.

BTW, I took your advice, and now I'm working on more songs with actual main melodies, like this. (With a pinch of randomness, that's just my style)

[[JD]is coming for you(SCA]

Very creative

The guitar riffs are very nice and the backing strings accompany it very nicely, nice immersing entrance to the song, really captures the mood right from the beginning :) Then an almost voice like pad comes in around 0:50 which just makes it even more creepy xD and then the floating space like instrument! Wow dude, great stuff. You could make it even cooler by adding some uber drum beat at the end in like a remix version or something :P Good stuff, keep it up.

enders1 responds:

thanks for the input man, glad you enjoyed the whole thing. I was thinking about some drum beat and some times but I suck at adding drums patterns so I focused on doing it all with just my guitar.

[What Once Was Lost - Mjattie]

Very professional

Has a very unique feel to it, the melodies are great and keep evolving, top notch stuff, well done mate :)

mjattie responds:

hey thanks man ;)

[The HalfAngelFreak]

Has a lot of potential

The way the melodies just come in and out is very cool, you need to develop volume control and vary the velocity of each note so that it gives it a realistic effect :) Add a beat in there aswell, could give it a real umph and make it more powerful. Make it longer too, if you want some help with it just set me a pm or something :) Keep up the work :D

halfangelfreak responds:

Thanks, this one is really meant to be shifty, because it's the opening theme to an RPG I'm making, it has an anime opening, and the parts are meant to match what's going on, but I might extend it.

[Os Vs Mjattie -of Softest Rain]

Sounds awesome

I know how hard collabs are, one guy disagrees with something the other doesn't have the software blah blah but you guys have really pulled off something epic here. Thanks for letting me know this existed :) The piano is very beautifully crafted and orchestrated and the melodies just speak for themselves :D oh wow, the beat just came in, very nice, wasn't expecting that lol. Ye all in all a great song, the drum patterns are really superb, just a bit of tweaking for volume levels needed here and there, apart from that its great, I wish you the best of luck getting this song out there :D

ObsidianSnow responds:

Cool, your input is really appreciated.

Thanks a lot, Jewelz!

[Take it easy*]

Has a nice vibe to it

Great stuff mate, you're really good with the guitar :) Love it :D

LedZeppelinluver180 responds:

thanks dood i messed up a few times but i thought o well

[Rock to the Hip Hop]

Has potential :)

The beat is nice, the melodies are pretty cool, you should vary the volume on the hi hat, that always make it sound a lot better and gives it a rhythm sorta thing, makes it sound more realistic. The instruments are ok but you could perhaps add a few strings here and there and maybe a piano to give it the higher end sounds? Just personal preference, but apart from this it sounds pretty cool :) Keep working at it :D

CaptainTwinkleToes responds:

Thanks for reviewing. Yes, I do believe now there should've been some other instrument, and that yes, the audio isn't varied enough. Thanks for the tip.

[Brinstar (Acoustic)]

Very chilled out

Made me feel really relaxed so thumbs up for you :P I haven't heard the original brinstar but this is just awesome, sounds similar to an artist called Nujabes. Good job dude, keep it up :)

AceIH responds:

Thanks!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vzTw4D -qpZ4&feature=PlayList&p=07579D1DF229 EE0F&playnext=1&playnext_from=PL&inde x=44

From 0:13 onwards...though it might not be recognizable at all until about 0:33. The truth is that about half of this song is original but I thought it fit the mood,

[Melody of the Stars]

Sounds very dancy

I like the use of effects and the melodies are wicked, the synth is nice too maybe just tweak the volumes a bit here and there to balance it all out but apart from that good stuff dude, very energetic :) love the pianos, keep up the good work

ViceOfFire responds:

Thanks man, I appreciate it.

You're right the overall levels should be tweaked a lot more, but I cant really be bothered going back to this song :P

I'm really glad you like the melodies.