Aydin-Jewelz123's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Celestial Hypersaw(preview 3)]

WOW :D :D :D

I must say dude, you have achieved new levels yet again! Wow dude, I'm admiring the rapid progress you are making. This sounds very cool and tech savvy :D I mean you made sytrus instruments sound decent!

Points of advice, you need to adjust some volumes here and there such as the piano at 1:22, instead of having it come in at full volume, have it come in from a quieter volume and build up, it will sound a far smoother transition and add man points to your piece :)

Keep up the good work, sorry the review came a bit late.

LedZeppelinluver180 responds:

Hey man its no problem at all it took you a little while thanks for the review tho... and yeah i know i need to fix the volume on the piano i just threw that in there really quick and wanted to get it online to see what people thought of it cause im almost done with this song. but yeah i will fix that. thanks for all of the complements i really appreciate it... dood i just made a new song too its also a preview but its a hip hop beat im putting on newgrounds right now so when you get a chance you should definitly check it out i promise it will be epic lol. its titled "Deep Thoughts" its not even close to being finished but im just givin everyone a preview of the most epic song in all the land lmao jk but you know what im saying when you listen to it. thanks again for the review man i appreciate it anytime you need one lemme know peace

[Just Hold On]

Well done

Shows the power of fruity loops when at the hands of a true master. Great stuff :) Can't wait to get my hands on the new fruity.

Simply AWESOME>!

[Athena (Beach Mix) Triplestar]

nice mix

keep it up :)

[Super Mega Hyper Idea Mas]

NICE!!

Great lineup dude, i normally dont like these kinda things but this is great, well done.

ErikMcClure responds:

Thanks xD

[Village [Redux]]

Wow..............

This is an amazing piece man, very nicely crafted and very artistic. The instruments blend in perfectly together and the overall piece is welded very nicely. You got all tens from me dude :) Could see this in a fantasy/rpg video game, amazing stuff. Make it longer!

ErikMcClure responds:

Making this song longer is somewhat tricky, since its designed as a subtle loop to be playing during a game, and so if I made it any longer it would likely be simple ambience. I probably could throw in a 3rd melody eventually though.

Glad you like it! :D

[New Hip Hop*]

Sounds tight

The beat works really nicely, just take a tad volume off the hihats, piano is nice, add a different rhythm to it and it will fit in even better making it feel kinda hip/hopish :) apart from that its pretty sick man :D well done

LedZeppelinluver180 responds:

:) thanks man i appreciate it you think the hi hats are too loud tho? hmm i guess they kinda are lol ill change that and make a new rhythm and see what happens with that too

[*Dark Dreams*]

Fits the name

This sounds very original so well done for that :)

Quick tips: Turn the volumes of everything down and turn your speakers up when making the song, this way you wont get static sounds or like rough sounding instruments when you've exported it. I use to have this problem and realised by simply turning down the volume the sound quality shot up. Errm, not many other points I can think of, its pretty well rounded and sounds finished to a good degree, make the ending varied a bit, perhaps have all the instruments do something crazy in quick succession then end it with a delay on all the instruments, like the nightmare was over or something.

Apart from these, this is a very well rounded piece. Perhaps make another one called Bright Dreams, taking the drum pattern into a happy version of the melody :P

LedZeppelinluver180 responds:

For sure dood thanks im glad you like what i have done lately

[City Night]

I'm liking it

The introduction is very good, some volume levels could be slightly adjusted, but thats not a major problem, what you need to work on is a different main body for the song, the way it sounded was that it was leading into a main section where a more powerful beat and perhaps a new melody was going to enter or it was going to be an anti climax where it would go quieter with just the drum beat and bass so that a rapper could jump in, one of these is essential to evolve your song further, perhaps 0:54 comes in earlier.

Has a lot of potential mate, work hard on this one ;)
Well done

LedZeppelinluver180 responds:

:) thanks ha ha will do man

[*Underground Experience*]

Sounds catchy and evil

Like the other dude said, you need to add some variety i.e. change the bassline or try something different with the pianos at some point, maybe take it up an octave. Adding in another instrument at one point may work. The cymbals at 1:41 chop up the song quiet harshly but if thats what you were aiming for then its ok but it didn't sound right to my ears, maybe ammend them. Start the song without the drum pattern or like have a drum roll into it, or have a piano roll into it, perhaps come in from quieter or something, experiment and see what you can do :)

Good work.

LedZeppelinluver180 responds:

for sure man ill see what i can do with it thanks a bunch for listening to all my music and reviewing it i appreciate it a lot